Wednesday, September 27, 2017

Observations (part 1)



Liesl Chesworth: The Entrance. Taxis and laundry bags

The entrance to the university campus is perhaps the closest thing to liminality a person can hope to encounter. The magnificent building, fronted by its own neatly-kept lawns, stands as a threshold into a world of academia that thousands of students call home. Just beyond this point are the gatekeepers – who have manifested themselves in the form of a security hut – and it is they who will decide the fate of those who seek to visit the university. Taxis and coaches frequent this spot like bees to a flower; collecting students or returning them, and if, at any point, there isn’t a taxi nor a coach to be found, there will always be several students waiting patiently for the next vehicle’s arrival, some of them smoking cigarettes to pass the time. Some sit on the concrete steps between the pavement and the security hut, surrounded by bags of laundry that are destined for the washing machines of their family homes. Others sit on their suitcases and swing their feet back and forth in anticipation. These people will be away for a while. Whilst many students will be travelling to unique, personal destinations, there is one method of transportation that is committed to taking them to a single place they all know and love: the free bus service into town. There is no rarer sight than seeing this bus in an empty state. It pulls up to its stop packed with students, its precious cargo, and once they have stepped off, twice as many people are ready to board it.
As the bus arrives at the front of university once more, and the next taxi pulls up, laundry bags are lifted into the crooks of arms, suitcase handles are grabbed, cigarettes are squashed into the ground, and the clockwork starts once more.


Jack Tait

Creative Edge: Adorable menaces win

10:45am
Amphibious birds sit stationary on a shallow tide, bobbing against the current. Their brethren waddling from window to window like hounds; hunting for their next meal. 

11:05am
The sun blinds the autumnal zombies, stirring their deep disturbed eyes as they move slow and weak towards their sandwich shop safe haven for thier caffeine fix before the day ahead.

A sudden echo of laughter and shrill screams can be heard above the cacophony of machinery as a horde of girls escape the confines of the large disjointed building to the right; eager to find a new purpose for the day. 

11:45am
Everything has its place in the area, the muscle factory in the distance forms jutting peaks on the horizon, with clouds emulating the smoke expected on any normal day. Slowly but inevitably, the living merchandise move's from the neighboring warehouses.

12:00pm
The amphibious birds approach, communicating in their native, hostile tongue.  Their scheme begins. A poor soul careless enough to bring their food outside is swarmed by the adorable menace. They feed the gaggle to the cute oppressors. You win this round ducks.





Maya Hutchinson:  A building filled with History


Maroon bricks separated by a thin soft brown, white window panes that hide the small lives of the many that have ever lived within. A relatively tall building that’s housed thousands and welcomes even more each year into its hold. Before it lies a garden of emerald who’s leaves dance in the breeze, each dew drop glistening under the sun’s rays. On this garden, figures frozen in action, frozen in steel. Statues that could have been inspired by someone’s lover or family, steel faces that no one will ever know whom they belonged to.
The leaves of the trees sway upon their branches, their green melting into a warm burgundy, signaling the end of a season.

A pavement whose original color is now lost with all the footsteps that have been made onto the stone, now it almost glows a dull yellow, contrasting with the green. The yellow path leads up to two lone steps that greet anyone to the building’s entrance, the doorway a black tinted glass door, nothing to hide, seeing through the glass gives a sense of security, that where you’re about to walk into has nothing to hide and is welcoming you from the brisk air outside and into its warm grasp.  Two sets of pillars on either side of the entrance, the very top of each pillar seeming to blossom with many folds creasing outwards, yet noting blooms from it. Instead it supports the building’s sigil, two chimeras standing and holding and oval that bears the stone carvings of three blossoming flowers.

Each person who walks the path that many before have as well, they all go to this building for different purposes, with different goals and desires, some stride into the place while others seem not quite as eager, yet all are likely to have one common desire, to succeed. A drive that helps them make every step ahead of them, much like a string that pulls ever so slightly.



Morgan Harrison: breezes and ants

The trees swayed in the wind, as though waving goodbye to someone unseen, with leaves dancing in merriment. The weather-beaten trunk bowed to the power of the wind, but did not break so easily. They sometimes stand alone, or in small cluster amidst a landscape of man and architecture, often unnoticed and unseen. People weave through them, past them, not thinking much of them. Both boys and girls struggle with fly-away hair and unzipped jackets flapping like the wings of a grounded bird. Some brace themselves against the cool breeze, clenching cups of coffee in their hands, hoping for the warmth to radiate throughout their body. Like ants, they rush about campus, scurrying to and fro from one building to the next.




Jade Mosley

The smell of nicotine was something that lay between loneliness and a fatal addiction to deaths close grasp. It’s his mother’s singing voice and forgotten paper in his bag. It lingers on his skin and plays with the hair behind his neck. Wispy, white tendrils curling, wrapping around each follicle tainting it with the stench of Cancer. The smoke plays the many moments he thought happiness lasted forever, and the smell flees to his brain. It relishes in between the lines and curves of his brain; then calls it home.
He probably never thought he'd call the burning of the smoke as it dripped down his throat, infecting his entire being home. But that slow burn meant him and he could have meant heated kisses in the backseat of the old beaten up Fiesta which broke down more than it started. It meant stolen glances as they profusely refused being together. It meant sneaking out at midnight getting caught in the cold downpour of their feelings as they danced in the overwhelming sense of completion, screaming into the darkness surrounding them and becoming each others light.
meant happiness.
He may wonder if he can call his friend home. As his smoke dissipates into the air, the Autumn breeze runs across the bare expanse of his arms, the cold showing but unknown to him as the heat of his cigarette burns through his throat and chest. But it’s easy to miss it when his friends by his side and the addicting taste and smell of nicotine is in between his fingers. He looks at him the way he’ll look at home.
He misses it.

He always does.
At least that's what he thinks.



Chloe Quale:

Stained Glass and reverberating laughter
Observational Writing- 22/09/17

The building is large with each room connected via long corridors. The décor makes the room seem old and grand, with deep coloured wood covering the floors and wooden panels and pillars running round the walls. A line of tall windows sit within each wall filling the space with light. Each window is adorned at the top with a stained glass image, each of a different design. The wooden fixtures give the room a warm feeling, the light taking on an orange hue as it reflects off it. The room holds seating for many people though not many sit in it now. A girls sits in the corner of the room observing a group of six as they sit together, loudly talking too and over each other. Though they are the rooms only occupants the echoes of their laughter reverberates around the room filling it from their table.


George Appleton

Students and grandfather clocks.

The health building and its surrounding pond and circular pathway is perhaps the least frequented part of the university and can even appear dull and quiet to the everyday passerby. Even the students passing by are few, making it hard to believe that only a five minute walk away is the heart of the campus. The still pond and lack of chattering students laughing over a coffee or their latest drunken exploits hilights the clear divide between the ever present static chatter of the hub and the calming silence of the western campus.
 Students stumble out their red brick accommodations, key cards swinging violently from their necks, mimicking the pendulum of an old Grandfather Clock, cruelly reflecting their lack of time. Already regretting living on the outskirts of action students rush to get to their early morning lectures on time. Whilst the student life in the West is perhaps the least populated, the flora and fauna bloom. The campus cat can be seen skulking through the bushes, as though deciding which students to entice over, only to run away at the last minute, enjoying the chase more than the actual petting. The ducks waddle around, disturbing the stillness of the water as their wings create ripples that expand across the whole body of water. The nearby pig statue appeals to student’s childish instincts as they all pose for photos upon the pig despite the sign forbidding it, acting as almost an Edge Hill rite of passage to all new students.


Joshua Taft

Chancellors Court, near the bridge over the water

I got here around about 10:40, and all I saw were phones, and they were everywhere. People were just milling about with their heads down, their arms tucked in and their hands cradling their phones as if it was a small miracle child that was to be revered for life. One chap stood out and that was because he was that busy texting and that lazy, he didn’t put away his phone whilst he was attempting to extract a cigarette and light it, and watching him juggle with a mobile, a cigarette case and a lighter was actually amusing to witness.
Returning, no doubt from the shops, was a girl laden with shopping, and like a young male to have just passed by wearing gym clothes, and both were now continuing on their way home. In a few windows were post-it notes that were used to spell larger words and sentences. Some were simple, like "Send KFC". One asked if anyone had Kik with an "xoxo" at the end of it, and another politely request for people to send food, presumably of any kind.
The wind was nice... it was the type of wind you enjoy experiencing. It didn't push and pull you nor was it non-existent and dry; it was a pleasant breeze that made you feel awake, relaxed and cool. The weather was affecting everything and it wasn't just the current climate but the climate of the night before. After last night’s rain, two benches outside a building in Chancellors Court, facing the Creative Edge building, were still wet and directly because of this, two women who were in anticipation for having a casual coffee outside were forced to relocate themselves to warmer areas for their very warm coffee. They sounded a bit miffed by it. The wind, on the other hand, was just soothing, and it created a parallel affect upon the water and shrubbery around it. Vibrations in the water made it look so much more tranquil and deeper than it actually is, and it was awfully tempting to dip a finger and see how cold it would actually be. The reeds and bank-plants and trees all were pushed and jostled as the wind blew and the noise it made was extremely relaxing.
And yet, despite the presence of the sun, the crisp and cool temperature permeated everywhere. Writing this numbed my hands and I yearned for a warm drink to revitalise myself. And then at 11:09, the sun came out and warmed me up considerably in that considerate way it bursts through the murky clouds to bestow upon a person one last ray of sunshine that was just beautiful to experience.
A lorry pulled into the barricaded work-zone wherein the new building is in development. It is extremely likely and essentially a certainty that it was delivering supplies and potentially even workers. Standing outside the wall was a workman in his green safety jacket for all the world to see him and notice him. Two lorries went in and after twenty minutes, both pulled out... two minutes later, I witnessed them passing through the car park by the Creative Edge building and presumably continuing all the way off campus.
High in the sky a bird was caught in the wind currents and the little creature was unable to fly straight - it managed to pull away and then it just drifted straight out of sight. Meanwhile down in the ground or swimming in the lake are the Canadian geese, geese I know to be classed as the most loathsome in all of Britain. As birds with such a reviled reputation, they were generally quite passive and ignorable of the events occurring around them, as I observed.
A dull throbbing of machinery as the workmen file away at their jobs like zombies prickled the ears but after a week of walking past it, my desensitised ears tuned it out ably and without struggle. There was a noise that went on behind me that I recognised as a match scraping against that red phosphorous on the box but when I turned around I turned out to be a bit of card scraping across the floor. In the distance, the sirens of an emergency services vehicle - two at that - when whistling and screaming past campus, and they must’ve been in a hurry for they were gone in minutes. One of those golf buggies drove past and the trembling of its engine added to the cacophony noise pollution of the distant cars, the rustling shrubbery and the tools of the work men's trade as they worked diligently. Another one went by and then noise it made resembled the purr of a not-so-terrifying creature but a cute and cuddly; I pitied the bloke driving it. It looked like it broke down a lot.
The smell was the same scent one would expect to experience trapped in a park. It smelt of grass and trees, of a domestic, manmade water source and of damp wood from the benches outside.
A poor cleaner was venturing across the bridge with a large grey wheelie bin and retuning it to Chancellors Court. A gang of people swept past in EH university hoodies and I desired one because they look really fucking comfortable and warm. A dead ringer for Donald Trump crossed the bridge with his hands on his hips and as he neared me, I acknowledged that it was merely a trick of the light. A goose barked as it swam down the stream; I looked down to type and returned my gaze upwards to observe only to find it missing. Sensibly, a peer donned her bright blue hoodie to escape the cold.
Pigeons flew down from the top of the Creative edge building and annexed the curving slope of the grassy knoll to their territory after the geese fled from it, back to the safety of the water.
Half an hour later, the geese started to approach the table I was sitting at, barking softly and toddling out the way of a man walking past with a trolley. Having reclaimed their annexed territory (the sloping knoll) they strutted their stuff like the kings they are. One brave soul took to a grassy part surrounding a building in Chancellors’ and two more followed his lead. One was very hesitant, however, and thought it would be better for the other geese to go off and to do their own thing while he nipped at his feathers in the middle of the path. Another one, younger than the first, decided to join him and the two spent a few minutes seeing to themselves before the younger one ambled off for his friends. The older geese remained where he was as the pigeons came back and they once again lost their knoll.
He put his foot down though as his mates came back and then they marched back to their home. They knew what these pigeons were capable of, it would seem, and as I was anticipating a flock of avian creatures to do battle, the geese let the pigeons have the hill by returning to the water but then the pigeons shot off ten minutes later, and I was left feeling anticlimactic.
A leaf also fell out of a tree. It was yellow and it was all the reminder I needed that winter was coming but only after autumn arrived first to drive the green and vibrant leaves from the trees.



Leah Davey

22.9.2017
A.M. Western Campus
Despite the bright and ever-present glare of the sun, the air holds a biting chill as it toys with grass and cattails, creating distorted ripples in the murky surface of the water. The cold leeches up through layers of clothes from the ground below, causing my whole torso to shiver. A lone, greying man leans over the brown metal railing and stares intently down at the pond. Despite the absence of ducks, he rips off and throws in chunks of bread. The crumbs are quickly lost in the churning of the water.
Cloth banners – no doubt of a trivial kind of importance – flutter impatiently at the urging of the wind.
Legions of high-heeled boots clack on the paving stones, and the links of lanyards collide with sets of keys in a repetitive but jovial jingle. A child scampers ahead of his family on his tiny feet, tap-tapping along the paving stones with an inquisitive voice and searching eyes. He talks incessantly with a high pitched lilt.
Laughter and murmured conversations are dragged past on the breeze. An intense but undecipherable argument strikes up from across the water, a group of girls divided into two teams much akin to rowdy supporters at a football match, only this time with no barriers to separate their flying hands and barbed words. After a few moments, they disperse as though they had never spoken at all.
Hurrying outside, a woman pleads, desperate, to a faceless voice on the other end of her phone for news of her sick son. Her face screams of a nervous and pitiful anguish. Another voice, from a faraway mouth, promises a distraught female friend, “one day, one day…”
Nearby, a girl perches on a low wall with crossed knees and her chin resting in her hands, gazing at the passers-by as though they hold the answers to all of life’s great mysteries. She likes what she sees and jots it down in her notebook with a smile. She is a Creative Writing student.


Lucy Barrett

Main Building

Outside
A piercing wind envelops the man, extinguishing his chance of lighting his poorly formed cigarette. Arching his frame forwards, he turns, concealing the roll-up beneath his leather jacket protecting from the gale. He continues towards his destination, but for several metres, approaches backwards, desperately triggering the lighter. A gentle smoky plume releases from the cigarette, exuding from the jacket. Success. He resumes normal walking in the desired direction, and hurriedly passes the bus stop to join his friends who had now almost completely vanished from view.

Outside
The bus stop was crowded. But the crowd was separated in to various cliques. Some, individuals, minding their own business, headphones in to impede the various sounds and harmonies. A group of boys. Although bitterly cold, the majority were without any jacket or covering, except for a small cotton-blend shirt, exposing the adolescent muscles and their growing egos.

Inside
A girl passes me. Aimless in her direction, looking around the walls and seating area. Unknown what she was searching for. I presumed either direction or inspiration. She beams a smile towards me, and I return it.

Outside
The bus stop has much fewer people than before. The crowd has now dispersed and scattered are individuals either glued to their mobiles are gazing aimlessly into space. No one speaks. But the sound of ignorance and silence swells loudly and an air of awkwardness rises.

Outside
Out of the large entrance doors at the front of the building, emerged the same girl from earlier. She now seemed to be walking with more conviction, more assured of where she wanted to go. As she approached the end of the promenade, towards the bench of which I was sat, I caught her glance, and beamed a smile towards her, of which she kindly returned.



Daniel Morris
Observational Piece

“13°. Partly cloudy.” A lie perpetuated by my mobile phone. Though a simple glance outside reveals the truth. The truth - pearl blue skies & a heavy breeze, sending the freshly-golden trees swaying side-to-side like a dancing couple on their wedding night.
Across the room – a fellow writer. Locked in deep thought, seeking desperately, those perfect words, that perfect sentence. Though were it so easy.
To my rear, the jocks. A space regularly reserved for learning, infested by those who in the current moment seem shamefully uninterested in such a thing.
A girl meanders along on her lonesome, slumping herself down to a PC, getting back to the hard stuff. Though to any casual observer she might seem ok, her rugged demeanour paints a vivid picture of drunken shenanigans, a story of a night rich with drink, dance & delight.
In the distance – the hunchback cleaner. Mumbling, bumbling. Frankly, it’s etched onto his face – this is his Groundhog Day. He’s on the brink, at his threshold. Resigned to this life of monotony. And to think – maybe he grew up with bigger hopes and dreams. An astronaut, perhaps? Maybe even a writer. Ha.
And last of all – there’s me. Like so many before me, fresh meat off the production line, larger-than-life ambitions. Though were it so easy. 






By John Brady
22/09/17 10:46
The Hub

The Hub is unusually quiet this morning. Outside, blue skies threaten to break out between grey clouds; the only life coming from a litter picker methodically eliminating evidence of rubbish and a few bleary-eyed students rushing to lectures they are clearly already late for, clutching notepads and laptops close to their chests. 

Inside the Hub, it is almost eerily quiet. A few lonely students sit at separate tables, ignoring the outside world with either their phone or a cup of coffee. Most look ill, either hungover or victims of the dreaded 'Fresher's Flu'. Tall window panes, arcing up to the ceiling and curving around the whitewashed building, flood the Hub with natural light, as tall banners and posters advertise meal deals and student discounts in bright colours. A television softly plays generic pop music, barely audible over the sound of students socialising. More enter now, in groups with steaming noodles, cool salads and bunches of fruit. They silently judge those already seated with sideways glances as they sit at elongated tables and discuss the revels of the night before and the horrors of the morning after. Their chatter and giggles fill the Hub with noise, creating a semblance of what the Hub normally sounds like. 

Staff wander around, in crisp black cotton uniforms with gleaming name tags. Wiping tables, serving tired-looking customers with caffeine boosts and tidying the area in a steady, staccato pace, they look bored. It is like watching a dancer perform a routine they have performed a thousand and one times, and wish they could replace with a new one, such is the ease and dullness with which they work. No matter how grubby the table, or how elaborate and creatively-named the hot beverage is, their job is second nature to them now, merely another task to perform in their mechanically steady rhythm. 



Courtney Hardaker

  The blinding autumn sun glitters across the rippling water that divides the Chancellor’s Court and Chancellor’s South halls of residence. A duck sails along the ripples between the rustling weeds that poke out above the water.
    A construction site merely yards away disturbs the peace, as the bangs from a bulldozer and from the crane hanging overhead causes three ducks to wade towards the edge of the water. One by one, they hop out onto the pavement, shaking any excess water off themselves as they did so, before clambering up the stone steps in single file. The largest, with the yellow beak and bottle green head, as opposed to the different shades of brown of the other two ducks, led the march towards the hill of grass which was still damp from the rain the day before. Occasionally, they would stop on their journey to peck at a piece of cardboard or an old cigarette that had blown off the bin. After deciding that they were not in fact food, they lost interest and waddled their way back to the water.
    Other than the chaos of the construction site and the difficulties of the ducks, the campus was relatively quiet. Apart from the occasional frantic fresher who hurried past, clearly late for a lecture of some sort, with their coats wrapped around them to shield them from the frosty wind. Surrounding all of this, post stick notes dotted the odd window to spell out little messages for all who could see.


Scott Meadows

The Bin Man

Tearing, chunk by chunk from a half loaf of Hovis, he waits. As each cluster falls from his hand, it attaches itself to the water below, as too do the dotted, golden wisps below - each fish darting at the prospect of food.

The particular nature of today only makes this elderly man's appearance more sublime, whilst the chill has begun pushing the crowds inside; and each gust of increasingly ferocious wind threatens to drive the creatures back into their hovels, yet they remain, almost through a mutual understanding they have with this man.

By his side, he carries a large black sack, set down momentarily, seemingly to allow himself these few moments of solace. A pair of green, heavy canvas overalls hang loose and restlessly upon two skinny legs, setting themselves finally atop two heavy-duty workers boots, completing an already obstructing ensemble. Where many would see little past a thick black mag, hanging against two narrow and tired shoulders, I can see that his proud stance amidst a vague hunch over the barrier, separating him from the waters admits a whisper of his youth, which only further encompasses his current frailty.

Dropping the final shred of brown bread to the mercy of the fish, he stops a moment. He looks out upon the scattering of beast and almost looks to admire his handiwork. 

He leans, laboriously lifting the black sack to his side, before taking the long, clasping spear in his other hand; before taking his leave. 

It is only now, when turning into a gazing beam of sun that has previously pressed itself against his back that he reveals himself fully. A delicate face, burdened with his many years, encumbered with two gaunt eyes, dragging loose, leathered skin beneath them. Whilst his black cap covered a majority of his head, it struggled to conceal the thin grey stubble of hair beneath it, like an old, worn scrap of carpet. 

As each slow step drags his body further from his perch, he glances briefly at me. A fleeting encouragement of civility between two strangers forces the shared sentiment of a smile between us, before he turns to continue on his route, none the wiser that any other soul had caught his singular moment of bliss, in this average day, in the centre of a busy walkway.


Millie Caunce

Observational Piece

The Creative Edge building is centred at the back of the University, a few minutes’ walk from the Main Building. As you approach the Creative Edge building you are struck by the mixture of luminous orange and a bland grey. Yet the modernisation is quite clear due to the open spaced windows and the large glossy sign reading ‘Creative Edge’ that are placed on the building.

Murky green garden chairs are placed in a bundle on the left hand side of the building. L shaped wooden benches sit perfectly in the corner, inviting individuals to perch themselves on the many available seats yet it remains eerily quiet.

As you walk away from the Creative Edge building you are left facing rather beautiful scenery. A clear lake is centred between the Creative Edge building and the spacious Chancellors Court halls that are filled with boldly coloured living spaces, cosy bedrooms and kitchens filled with all of the mod cons. The lake glistens as the early morning sun beams upon it. Large strands of weeds emerge from the water swaying gently to the harsh breeze. And clusters of lily pads can be seen floating swiftly as the breeze pushes them around the lake.

A grey bridge perks itself in the middle of the lake allowing the public to not only cross with ease but to also admire the lake with more depth. The lower part of the lake holds more beauty due to the corner which is known as ‘the small beach’. A patch of sand lies in the corner aiming towards the halls, with a wooden bench allowing you to sit yourself down and imagine the setting as a relaxing beach. This lovely setting also allows you to be close to the lake and view the many families of ducklings/ducks promptly swimming by.

Groups of dainty little flowers and trimmed bushes are clustered together around Chancellors Court representing a nature scene. Trees of different sizes also surround the halls, some resembling voluminous Christmas trees whilst others are much smaller in comparison and slimmer.

As you walk away from the setting of the lake you will come across three benches perfectly in line with one another. This allows you to sit yourself down and come face to face with steps made of stone which allow you closer access to the lake. Several eager faced students can be seen sat on the benches appreciating the scenery that is before them or quietly sketching away in their notepads.

On the left side of Chancellors court, you will come across a narrow path guarded by small metal fencing. Behind the metal fencing you can briefly see workmen who are completing the new library whilst chattering away. When you begin to walk away from the Creative Edge building and begin to head towards the right you are faced with a long widened path overlooking a selection of shapely trees and the Main Building.



Amy Sinclair

10:40 am. A mid september morning, where the last remaining summer warmth lingers in the air, battling against the approaching autumnal chill which grabs onto your skin with each gust of wind. The ruler of the lakeside burns in a circle of luminous white yellow as it stares down at its audience below casting out an almost god like omniscient ora. Once again, as with each day, the battle for the suns attention begins.
Perhaps the most intimidating competitors are the reedmace, congregating together, huddling around the edges of the lake building their strength within numbers. They aim to triumph by swaying in a slyly aggressive manner in synchronization to one another. The army of vegetation keep their stature elevated, as their elongated spines brush against one another, creating a hissing whistle which one could mistake as coming from a snake navigating its way through the nooks of the lakeside.
In complete contrast to the menacing arrogance of the reedmace, the lethargic lily pads sleepily spin in a circular motion aiming to win over the sun's rays through a desperate call for energy. Their deep green leaves act as resting places for buzzing flies to seek refuge from the water.
The most aesthetically grabbing contestant are the iris and hibiscus, their vibrant colours of lavender and bright yellow screaming out to the sun's rays. The dappled light breaks through gaps within the clouds and intensifies the colours as the flowers work with the breeze to create a dance, where they petals sway and swirl like they are performing in a ballet.
The oldest of the lakesides inhabitants are the twisted willow tree, five of them, placed on each corner of the waters edge. They watch amusingly over the reedmace, lily pads and flowers, their elderly branches rapping round in curled and contured shapes. Up close, hundreds of markings on their wooded skin tell years of stories, scars and weathering formed from age. Their battle for the suns attention is nearly non existent, they believe their purpose in the lakeside is simply to watch over, they are the grandparents of the scene.
The sun, moving its way across the sky, looks down below at the contestants. The light glistens on the water creating kisses of glitter like stars. It takes each into consideration, shining over the reedmace, gleaming down on the lilypad, lighting up the iris and hibiscus and warming the willow trees before making its decision. Upon deciding that none of the of the performances were worthy enough, the sun then disappears behind a thick cloud leaving the once brightened scene darkened and somber.
11.30 a mid september morning.


David Fitzgerald
The Building of Ancient Knowledge
A pathway filled with decaying leaves pass by the monumental brick layered building known as the library. This building of ancient knowledge loomed over the surrounding trees that rustle their leaves gently in participation with the refreshing breeze that found its way around the area. The windows of the building were tinted black yet were supported by a frame layered in green coats of paint as if the designer wanted to draw attention towards the windows yet not allow to see what was awaiting inside. The library would appear to be dormant if it wasn’t for the singular hooded student in black jeans and scuffed trainers who slouched their way out of the entrance as a dragon would awaken from its ancient slumber. By the entrance of the library there stood a bold, purple flag that also swayed in coordination with the breeze. Mere seconds after the wind would blow, a new leaf would fall victim to the force and would begin to spiral slowly, gently, quietly down onto the pathway below to join the rest of the leaves. One leaf would daringly avoid contact with the path and would instead lightly brush against the trio of black mysterious wooden figures that gathered to the right of the library entrance as if they were too afraid to enter the resourceful building. The figures appeared to be hunched yet upon closer inspection they remained without a head and a lack of limbs. The mystery of the figures are unknown to most yet one is always able to find the answers necessary in the building of ancient knowledge.


Caleb Anderson

Heart of the Campus
There lies an air of deafening silence, equally inevitable and jarring. Lone souls working – or, at the very least, giving a convincing facade of doing so – on assignments, with various degrees of success.
Sat not 20 feet away, a young man frantically attempts to write onto his tablet, sapping what little scraps of energy the empty cup of black coffee by his side will give him. This, alongside his clothing choice – which can only be described as “unique”, and even then, it doesn’t do it justice – and his wavering concentration make it all too clear that he has only just woken up. He looks at his phone – the third time this minute – and lets out an exasperated sigh. Whatever is stopping him from completing his work, whether it be a lack of time or a lack of company, it seems to be working. He looks at his tablet once more, being packing it away and departing.
I turn towards the Union and view the mass of humanity entering, most likely to flood the SUBWAY®. And yet, as time passes by, not one soul leaves the building. What once was a quiet shop is now no more. The peace and tranquillity it once held dearly has now been taken from it, leaving the employees – or, as they wish to call themselves, “Sandwich Artists™” - to put on their “happy faces” and begin sifting through the river of bodies, not sure when – or if – it will end. Taking one last glance down at the lack of souls entering or leaving, I slowly go the same path as the young man. As many before us have done. And many more will do so in whatever future lies ahead.


Their Home – Zainab Chohan

Those penetrating rays bounce off the water’s edge. It’s elegance hypnotizing. I shelter my curious gaze, with the palm of my hands, to peek closer. The green residue floats in ease as it secures its residence within. The abandoned float left within the center of the vast liquidized silver, losing all purpose. A few feathery friends come to visit, their heads bobbing, as if dancing with the breeze that accompanies the leaves, falling, creating those natural creases above the water’s surface.
With a sudden jolt, a venomous beauty distracts my gaze. The harmful yet casual creature wisps passed the nape, then vanishing so suddenly as it appears. The cold draft now begins to kick in. The small feathered friends begin to retreat. The fascination of their gentle swimming working wonders. The residence now on lockdown. The intruders peer down from above, their cry almost like a signal of war. Those white beings look down upon their vast ocean, our small lagoon, making rounds within the air as if plotting their next attack. One swoops down with such speed and hope of achieving something with their actions. Our small feathered friends still camouflaged within its habitats greenery, decide to take a detour.
Taking two caramelized sidekicks, a dark beauty emerges from the water’s edge, waddling its way toward the four large, meaningless steps. As if masters, they climb to their exit with ease and begin to browse the area. The female onlookers froze with delight, watching the cute waddling creatures pass by, with adoration and love. They eventually vanished around the corner creating such loneliness, we all looked down. The sun’s rays continued to crystalize the water’s surface, the green vegetation rustling as the breeze passed by, the sound like the rubbing of sandpaper. Forceful yet satisfying.
Just as all calmed, our three travel-some agents returned, gracing us with their presence. All eyes turned their way. Pens stopped, conversations now silent. The inaudible authority controls all nerves. We all observe, love and care as they pass, ensuring that none stands in their path. As if Royals, they scout the area and proceed. Their waddling still catching the spare glances of those who walk by, all still avoiding their path. As they approach, their vivid colours are enhanced. The browns, greys, blues and reds. Such intricacy and randomness, yet perfect. Not two feet from my seat yet they prune in such peace.
Like children in the summer, one takes the initiative and they waddle after each other. Playing tag, disappearing behind the marbled sculptures and reappearing with waddling surprise. The unconscious smile that formed, the sight could put tears in my eyes.
They decide to rest, waddling back to their habitat. Their feathery bodies shrinking as they continue. As they approach the edge, their heads pushed first. They dive back in, creating the ripples that forge one of the beauties of their homeland. As they vanish into their sanctuary, the wind continues to blow, ensuring its place within the habitat. The green inhabitants still resting, floating in peace. They rays of light gradually vanishing behind the everlasting rain clouds.
The cold now spreading…it’s time to leave.


Bethan Ratcliffe

It is difficult to tell whether the pond on the western side of campus is a tranquil place, or a lonely one.
The sun is out, glinting gently off the water, but the air is cold and biting to the fingertips. There are people. Not many, but they are around. Walking from building to building, slowly, with their heads down. Conversations are hushed, a little secretive. There is a sign that warns students away from the aggressive geese, but there are no birds on the water.
There is movement. Trees in the distance, hundreds of reeds in the foreground, swaying together. Despite their number, they barely produce a hiss of sound. The water is windblown, stripes of ripples across its surface. Somehow, the pond remains still. A small rush of air pours steadily out of a building through a vent; left over words from inside lecture halls filter out with it, but it is impossible to make out any meaning. When a flock of small black birds moves overhead, they make no noise.
Overwhelmingly, this is a quiet place.
An argument breaks out on the other side of the pond. Their voices echo, and they seem so small.


Amy Readyhough
22 September 2017

The faculty of Education Building

I spot a man feeding bread to the fish in a duck pond. On passing I follow the perimeter of the pond, closely followed by fallen leaves skipping across the ground. Around the pond are long swaying weeds eclipsing a small arched bridge ahead of a 3 miniature waterfalls which join to become one. Across this bridge leads to barren trees in shades of orange and brown, the branches twist and turn like the old nobley fingers of a boney hand. All the shrubs perish in the frosty air: the trees, the weeds, the bushes even the plants with large leaves almost as though they'd been there since the Jurassic ages. Though there are signs describing the wildlife which can be found by this pond, there are no rabbits, no ducks, no geese, nothing of the sort to be seen. A group of girls crowd another sign: ‘do not feed the Canada Geese’. They discuss the possible grammatical errors: “Canada” or “Canadian”, yet they don't comment on the lack of these creatures. A passing child chants “I want to see the duckies” to which the father replies “there are no duckies”. As the clouds grey and the birds fly south it is obvious that Autumn is approaching.



Kieran Robinson
22.09.17: An Early Autumn Morning.


The grounds brim with enthusiasm. Gaggles of the young drift like dandelions on the wind, listless but not without purpose. Despite many of them running on no rest, their conversations bubble with laughter and excitement for the coming year and the realisation of their truest aspirations.

The cold breath of September turns to ice, like the first hint of grey in the beard of a young man. The drifters respond with grimace and a quickened pace. The sun grins on in their wake, a forced smile diluted by the first whispers of autumn. Some meandering students cast their gaze to the ground, seeking a reprieve from the suns pale light only to flinch and squeeze shut their eyes at the sunlight reflecting off of perfectly slotted white flagstone floor. Convincing themselves that the light below is preferable to the light above, they continue to stare at the ground whilst marching towards sanctuary, found in the warmth of the HUB.

As time goes on the steady stream of students turns to a trickle in reply to the beginning of morning lectures. Those that are fortunate enough to have time to spare flee in terror of the mild mid-morning wind. With a new found peace brought about by the absence of activity and the rejoice of coming winter, the maple trees sway in rhythm with the wind; a vibrant dance painting a stark contrast of shimmering green against the static white flagstone floor that compliments well the window frames of the library. As children do with their parents, the flowers mimic the dance of their taller siblings, pale and white like the sunlight and as carefree as the breeze. A wasp shares in the revelry, alone in itself but invited to treat with the flowers, buzzing and whirring loudly from place to place, fortunate enough to have free time.






Thursday, October 06, 2016

Mass Observation 2016: Final thanks and wrapping up for this year


OK: that’s that! This year’s crop of Mass Observations are now all up on this blog, Peggy’s Blue Skylight, which is a unique record of a number of years of asking students to look with attention at the world around them (and the campus is a New World for all of them).

 

Here is a list of some events on this year which will enrich your writing coming soon:

 

Real Story First Year Trip – Saturday 22nd October – Anthony Burgess Centre – Free trip for First Years

 

Andrew Michael Hurley - Wednesday 26th October, 7.30, Arts Centre - £4.50

 

Simon Perril - Wednesday 16th November 2016, 7.30, Arts Centre - £4.50

 

Maung Day Edge Hill University International Writer in Residence - Residency – 20th November – 4th December

 

Ekphrastic Poetry Reading and Workshop: Maung Day, Niall McDevitt and James Byrne at The Tate Liverpool - December 3rd 2016

 

Three leading international poets, Niall McDevitt (Ireland), Maung Day (Myanmar) and James Byrne (England) will participate in an ekphrastic response to the 'In Focus' Tate exhibition of William Blake and Tracey Emin. There will be a Creative Writing workshop between 1-3 in the Clore Learning Centre lead by Maung Day and James Byrne. Workshop writers will bring in up to 5 pages of work that somehow responds to the Tate Liverpool exhibition and receive editorial advice and writing exercises on how to respond to visual artwork. This will be followed by an evening reading with all three poets in the TEX venue. 

 

Free to Edge Hill Students - 1-3 (workshop), 4-5 (reading) to sign up for the workshop and/or reading email: byrnej@edgehill.ac.uk

 

Edge Hill University Press Event - Tuesday 22nd November 2016, FREE but tickets must be booked – available to book from September 19th, Arts Centre

 

 

North West Camarade – various venues with poets in collaboration, through December and January, but culminating at Edge Hill University on 19th January 2017

 

Michel Faber – Tuesday 7th February 2017, 7.30pm Arts Centre – £4.50

 

The Robert Sheppard Symposium - Edge Hill University, Ormskirk, Lancashire, Wednesday 8th March 2017 – FREE to Edge Hill University Students.

 


 

This Symposium will explore the creative and critical writings of Professor Robert Sheppard, involving panel sessions throughout the day in M40/M41 and an evening reading at the Arts Centre at 7pm. Readers and panellists to include Allen Fisher, Zoe Skoulding, Scott Thurston and Robert Hampson. The Symposium and readings are both free but reservation is required: byrnej@edgehill.ac.uk

 


Tuesday, October 04, 2016

Mass Observations 2016: People Watching an Aesthetic of Mourning Morning

Amongst the mourning of the morning

A plethora of pupils engage me as I perch myself amongst the mourning of the morning. A sandy haired first year spins cautiously above me on a padded red chair as her laptop comes unglued from her thighs, momentary worry is halted swiftly by a well-timed adjustment of grip. Nike and Adidas adorned hooves stampede through this hub of activity, passing less like ghosts and more so like that of a cavalry.  Coffee vibrates in palms as a glum, yet obedient, bronze four-legged charmer crosses the stream of my vision; he offers a nod to those who glare at his ears.

 
Re-stocks of plastic spoons and Irn-Bru by black cap wearing assistants presents normality in the face of a young man who should certainly have remained in bed. Bottle upon bottle of water is splashed across the campus, hydration being key of course. A used napkin floats recklessly through the aftershave infested air as the lady in grey shakes her head in a mechanic fashion. The hotdog vendors flirt carelessly around the mustard as the ketchup coughs up blood. I spot the boy in black reluctantly and half-heartedly attach his hand to that of his girlfriends. I do wonder if it be simply the fact she has a cold.


Trolley carts whistle at me and I am ashamed to tell them I already ate before I came out. White emulsion spat across the decorator will take more than the one wash and his cup of earl grey will have gone stone cold, yet, he is the picture of content as he reaches his desired smoking spot. A checkered soul would look more at home in an airport lobby for all the baggage he holds. Suitcase wheels to concrete and sleep (or lack their of) to scathed skin.

 
A gent of Berkeley or Yale and his gaggle of companions muddles past me and I am somewhat amused at his cream trousers. He, I am most certain, would not dare offer me a look for fear of my ghastly hair blinding him. So much is heard from never actually listening at all.

 

- Lewis Oldham


The aesthetic of it

At my destination, I see the serene water of the lake gently rippling as it is disturbed by two ducks. They seem to be floating, but what we don’t see is their feet paddling as fast as they can enabling their graceful façade. A male and a female, a family, minding their own business as they swim by and ignore those around them.

The air is crisp for mid-September, a cool breeze contrasting against the hot sun beaming down, engulfing everything below it. Clouds come and go, silently watching over us, moving swiftly with the wind and occasionally blocking the heat making the chilling breeze ever more noticeable.

The sound of the water is prominent. The fountain displaying a loud gushing and breaking the silence that encompasses the area. As people walk by, busy on their route of the day, I catch small insights into their lives through conversations with their peers. It is hectic, yet somehow they manage time for social occasions as they update their friends with the antics of the night before.

A dull bellow from above draws my attention away from the quiet chatting around me and distracts me. I look up to see an aeroplane passing over, weaving in and out of clouds as though they were obstacles in an obstacle course. Racing through the sky towards a far off destination. Carrying hopeful and excited passengers, eager for their well-deserved break from the responsibilities of everyday life.

The buildings circling the area are vast contrast of each other. One looking rather like a large, metal cocoon of creativity of imagination whilst the other look similar in appearance with brick walls and large glass windows but you can tell each room inside will have an individual’s spin put on it as they have made that their home for the next nine months. As the sun continues to beam down during a moment of cloud-free sky, the reflection of it from the water gleams onto the metal cocoon building making it glisten, adding to the aesthetic of it.

Leah Arnold

 

People Observing:

A young student is sitting on a wall; he’s on his phone texting away, a wasp comes towards him, he doesn’t spot it until it’s right next to him, he looks up from his phone and he starts whacking it with his hands, from far away it looks like he is just attacking thin air. The wasp still hasn’t left him alone, He stands. He runs away. The wasp follows.

On the opposite side of the wall, a girl is sat on the bench, the wasp has now gone from one student to the next, she sits there not bothered by it, she’s already seen it but she carries on typing away on her iPhone, the wasp lands on her neck. She doesn’t move. It stays there for a good five minutes before it flies up towards her face and she whacks it away. The wasp starts coming towards me, I get up and walk away.

The wind picks up and leaves blow in the shadows. A guy in a black hoodie and sweatpants walks past, he’s on his phone. His voice grows louder and louder shouting “She started yelling at me” People turn to look at him, he doesn’t notice, he carries on walking until he is out of sight.

People are huddled together all around forming small groups, one group consists of two girls and one guy. The two girls are wearing an Edgehill University jumper both in grey with jeans and sneakers, practically wearing the same outfit. The guy is dressed in a jeans, white shirt and black leather jackets slowly trailing behind them, they walk past the Arts centre building with hot dogs in their hands, the guy has ketchup all over his mouth. He wipes it away with the back off his hand.

Three students were engaged in a debate over what they called a sandwich. The brunette states “It’s called a barm”. The other two turn to look at her with the same look on their face, the tall black haired guy and frizzy mousey brown haired girl say “I’ve never heard of that” the girl turn to the brunette’s asking “what’s that?” The debate gets louder as each of their volume rises. Finally the guy shouts “It’s called a cob”.

-Mia Harris (Hughes)

 

 

 

 

Thursday, September 29, 2016

Mass Observation 2016

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Mass Observation 2016: Beach and Bench!


10.30 - Beach

A quiet site, fountains can be heard around me along with the faint beeping of a truck reversing, suddenly the sound of people laughing interrupts and I can see them walking by. Across the bridge, underneath them a duck can be seen dipping it’s head into the waters below. I fear for how cold the water must be. With small brushes of winds, I feel the first signs of winter push against me but also the trees and plants too.

11.10 – Creative Edge Bench

A small insect marches his way across the table I sit upon, taking no notice to me as I scribble down his movements into my journal. His movements are slow although his little feet move quickly, all repetitively going back and forth until eventually he disappears over the edge of the table, I wonder where it is the small insect is going.
Suddenly, a familiar sound creeps into my ear as the group from earlier comes walking and laughing by, all of them with hands full of grocery bags. Something catches my eye behind them as a small duck comes making his way away from the pond, it’s orange beak bright against the deep green landscape, it’s bright beak picking against the grass, until it eventually waddles its way into a bright green bush.
Out of nowhere comes a couple and their Golden Retriever, a surprising sight to see on-campus. Its delightful smile is a nice addition to the scene as it makes its way into the Creative Edge building.
Small clusters of people make their way across the campus, all going their own way, no sound can be heard from them at all, even the ones right in front of me are as quiet as mice. Only the fountain in the pond can be heard as it sends streams of water into the murky pond, and even the sound of that is faint and easy to forget about.

I start to take a look around me, paying close attention to the sights around me, trying to take it all in.  The sky is a light shade of blue today, with small strikes of clouds etched out across the blue canvas. In front of it lies the Creative Edge building, big and bold it stands tall. With its boxed design, all dark shades of grey except the bit of red that creeps into my vision just to the right.  Then to the left lies a giant clump of mud, squared off by metal fences, although it doesn’t add much to the image it is a sign of progress, a reminded that the campus is constantly growing. In front of it is a tall and skinny tree that stands firm against the cold winds, with its light vibrant green leaves only slightly shaking against the winds. Suddenly the winds calm down and for a second the sun glares down on me and I feel hot, I take this time to enjoy the feeling and I smell the nature surrounding me and it feels nice to know that is what is around me.

Charlie Cairns
PS There is a 'beach' at Edge Hill. I've never seen it, but students have. (ed)

Wednesday, September 28, 2016

Mass Observation 2016: Brunch, Male Genitalia and Bedhead's Stubble


A Blackbird’s Brunch at Edge HIll

 

The Arts Centre. The place in which your character can be anything you want it to be, and your imagination is free to take over and control you.

Costumes. There is nothing more powerful than the transformation of an individual through their outfit. Bursts of gold, pleats and ruffles and spirals of black and red are contrasting with the gentle pastels on falling, elegant chiffon. A medieval theme seems to be occurring here.

People. Everywhere. Milling around. Taking things in. Having coffee. Relaxing with friends. Laughter fills the red painted walls. A small group of girls are dancing to Beyonce in the right-hand corner of the social area; whether for fun or for routine, they seem to be enjoying what they are doing. Another group of students are in the opposite corner, stood and sat down, practising their lines for an upcoming play. Possibly Goodbye Gunther, which is the next theatre production to be shown here. The atmosphere inside this bustling building is juxtaposed with the view from outside of the window in which I am sat.

Outside, everything is purely tranquil. A beautiful peaceful aurora graces this part of the campus. It would make the perfect picnic spot in summer. Looking out here, one can only imagine the many groups of friends sat here at many times of the year, or lone individuals on a lunch break, head in a book. Oak trees gracefully dance in the gentle wind. The grass, freshly cut, is filled with an overlay of rustic, brown and orange leaves – autumn has arrived now.

A hopeful blackbird comes for his brunch on the opposite side of this pane of glass, but evidently has no success, and flies on its search for its meal.

The occasional lost –and no doubt, hungover- first year crosses the path at the side of the building, but none stop to appreciate the fine metal sculptures or picturesque scenery – presumably because they’re late for a lecture.

Beyond the circumference of the Arts Centre, the student information centre is bustling with busy students: “What do I do about this?”, “Where can I find that?” – You can almost hear the anxiety in their voices.

Upstairs, theatre halls are currently being set up for ‘Free Film Fridays”, which I suspect will be popular with the newcomers; after all, nobody in the right mind would turn down a free night out.

The weather slowly takes a turn, and the clouds gradually make a move over the sun. The wind’s pace fastens, and students are now wearing jackets over their summer t-shirts. Sudden temperature drops and chilly mornings like this bring out the inner excitement for autumnal events.

Sitting here, watching, keeping to yourself and your thoughts, over a warm cappuccino makes one wonder about the lives that all of these people lead. The man over there in blue jeans could be the next scientist, who may find the cure to many illnesses, he may have a wife and a dog, they may already be successful. The girl sat in the corner with her earphones in may be the next huge fashion icon, she may be obsessed with vogue and indie music, off to every gig with all of her best friends. Who knows what kind of lives these strangers lead, or whom they are about to become. Only time will tell.

 

Rachel Whittingham




 

The green outline of male genitalia

 

10:40 AM

Two mallards, one male and one female, waddle across the grass by the sports track and pause momentarily by a large tree.


10:49 AM

You can tell a lot about a student by the sticky notes they choose to display in their windows. For example, the owner of this particular flat is presumably fan of retro game characters. They, whosoever they might be, have gone through the trouble of assembling little squares of sticker paper in the forms of a space invader and pac-man villain.

The flat opposite which shows the green outline of male genitalia, however… Well, that speaks for itself.


10:54 AM

A young woman plods up the path, hugging her arms close to her chest and keeping her eyes trained on the floor.


11.20

Two students sit side-by-side, one contentedly typing on his laptop and the other scribbling in a notebook. They don’t communicate to each other but, appear comfortable in each others presence. Simply knowing they aren’t alone is enough to keep them going. They look across at each other in wordless acknowledgement of this unspoken fact.

 

Kaden James

 

 

 

Bedhead and Stubble

 

A tractor slowly hums its way through the army of parked cars. The danger that it might hit one of them seems to be increasing as it turns its corner, but it made it safely out of the metal maze. Now that it's drudged behind me I feel rather scared for the poor thing; I doubt I've ever heard such an almighty racket! I wouldn't be surprised to turn around and find half the running track torn apart. 

Two blokes with bedhead and stubble just passes, glaring at me with deadpan eyes. Even if I hadn't looked up their aura of judgement radiated too strongly for me to ignore. Another girl followed them just behind; her contempt expression regarding life indicated that 10:50 may be a tad too early for her. It doesn't help either that she reeked of smoke and dropped her used fag to the ground as she walked away.
Then again, a couple just bounced past giggling. It's refreshing to know that not everybody is all doom and gloom before lunchtime. Perhaps they're enjoying this short patch of nature that interludes the overpowering sense of industrialisation. 

The trees are blowing stereotypically in the wind that's freezing the tips of my fingers.

To my left 4 men are having a good chat, chuckling away at each other’s jokes.  They seem to be lecturers, a student with untamed shaggy hair is asking them directions. Unfortunately one of them, the shortest with a magnificently twirled moustache, has spotted me staring at him. I doubt he approves of such peculiar behaviour, judging from his short decision for him and his friends to venture back inside where warmth awaits. 

A girl with long, pampered hair just strutted past giving the world her best 'cool kid' swagger. Her fur coat I can empathise with though, the wind's picked up brought a nasty chill along with it. My fellow creative writing student and I have both progressed now to sniffing where necessary and wrapping up as tightly as our coats will allow. 

I do find the traffic cones quite amusing. They've placed them hopefully between the road and the grass, but I fail to believe that if a grumpy driver didn't already know to drive one the road, a few small orange triangles are hardly going to provide much direction here. 

The campus has really hushed up now, even the distant rumble of cars on the motorway mixed with the profanity I can hear in a nearby flat can't really ruin this idyll. One bird is floating above the car park alone. Not in a lonely way, it just seems to be playing a game in a naturally graceful way. It'll swoop low to the cars, seeing how close it can get without touching them, before rising to the skies. Personally I think it's a bit of a show off, but I do hope that the other birds are watching from all their respective trees so this acrobatic display won't have gone to waste in the aviary community. 

A man in pale blue just walked past dragging a bin so large that the nearby skips may well get rather jealous. He's paused for a moment down the path, just long enough for the garbage smell to drift downwind to me. I'm disappointed in the surrounding pine trees, I thought they were supposed to be a fragrant constituent of nature, but they've failed to drown out the repugnant stench of rot now filling the air. 

I briefly abandoned my post just now; somebody mentioned "Free hot dogs in the Hub" and, as a student, I feel I was obligated to follow that lead. I'm eating it now, and it's delicious!

 

 
Callum Trueman